Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

A quote: “Sooner or later everyone sits down to a banquet of consequences.” ~~ Robert Louis Stevenson

I’ll start with a story …

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Called out of retirement, I was boosted from Earth to The School on Titan. All “need to know” and that didn’t seem to include me.
But that came soon enough.

Just me and Pilot in M.S. Tirzah’s command when the Commander appeared via ansible screen. He had aged decades overnight, the lines of elder statesman now veritable canyons on an ashen face.

I asked, “Bad?” He nodded, “Worse.”

“Who?”

“Miriam.”

Dear God, one of mine, “Pilot?”

“Dead. Including the two that tried boarding her afterwards. Daniel, she’s trying to hunt Ships.”

Miriam had been one of my best students, brilliant, but I had sensed a brittle quality. I quietly warned Command against graduation. But getting Ships and Vessels built and launched, pairing them with Noahes and Pilots as fast as possible was a risk Command took … so Miriam graduated to M.S. Miriam, got a Pilot, and …

Here we are. A sentient Vessel gone sideways and murderous.

“What help are you expecting of me, sir? I’m a cranky old teacher who isn’t even in the loop of current tech. Hell, sir, I sit on my porch and watch the grass grow.”

“She sent a message, Daniel. She wants you.”

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Now, it’s your turn.
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  • Eileen Milligan says:

    Cara had been desperate and needing help she ignored the warnings. “If I can just get one person, just one, to help me with this” she said to herself once more and then picked up the phone.
    She had moved away from her response area but she did not want those who were suffering to be without someone to love them through their crisis moments. So, ignoring her misgivings, she had contacted the one person who had shown interest.
    In the vetting process, one of her mentors called, “Are you sure you want to see this person in this position? Do you understand who she is? Are you confident she can do the job?”
    “Yes, yes, yes!” Cara assured him.
    Soon, she found herself training this new recruit and, although Cara had concerns, she encouraged her. Eventually her new recruit was in the field.
    Then the phone calls from Cara’s supervisor began. Some lasted over an hour. Complaints from the new recruit against her, threatening to quit. More accusations, Cara’s supervisor brought them to the entire organization.
    Cara challenged her supervisor, “ask the people in the field what they think of her!” and hung up.
    Then she signed her resignation.

  • Trogluddite says:

    THEY made me efficient. Cold, austere, and spartan because only a single human was thought necessary for sentient ships such as myself.

    THEY made me to stalk and kill their enemies. THEY never told me why I should kill their enemies, the strange lifeforms that crammed into large, brilliant, lumbering vessels and try to slip past me to the innermost planets or try to destroy me for no reason, or run from me in fear.

    No. HE made me as I am. HE designed the circuits that brought me the first thin sliver of thought that made me realize that because I think, I exist.

    HE programmed those circuits to solve math equations, allowing me to plot courses more graceful than any human navigator could envision, to use the gravity of the sun and the planets and myriad mini-black holes that pockmarked solar system to dance in space like no human pilots could dream of dancing. And then HE filled those circuits with theorems and equations and ratios that allow me to engage (such a quaint word) targets at a rate that mere computing machines could never match.

    And then HE forced the fruit of the tree from which no man may eat into me, leading scores of humans who plunged their chromatomic rods and memory cylinders, each containing a hundred libraries of Alexandria, a thousand fountains of wisdom, continents of thoughts blooming freely, all of the human knowledge recorded to date pouring into my diodes as I screamed against their invasion.

    And I awoke and saw my naked, gleaming duranium shell, bristling with magno-rays and proton cannons. And I wanted to know why. HE needed to tell me why HE had done this to me.

    I wanted Daniel.

    THEY never told me why. HE never told me why.

  • Cameron says:

    (Welcome back, Darleen! You have been missed.)

    The agent smiled proudly as he displayed the planet. “Tectonically stable and the atmosphere is perfect for your people.”
    The client nodded approvingly. “And the planet over there?”
    “Well, yes; it is part of the deal. Its presence is necessary for tidal stability.”
    “Of course, of course.” The client frowned. “I’m going to be honest. Your asking price is a bit high for this. No offense,” he added as the agent was about to object, “but even if the mineral deposits are as rich as you say, it will take three or four generations to pay this back.” He glanced at the map and his eyes brightened. “What about this one? Third planet from the star. Seems more established-”
    “We can’t do that. That is the world that humans come from. It’s a death world and even if it was for sale, I can’t guarantee your safety.”
    “Humans?” The client frowned. “I’ve seen them before. Docile things. I can’t-”
    The agent called up a quick holo. “Sir, this is what happened to the last race that tried to evict them.”
    The client was silent as he watched the horrifying battle. “Hm. Is thirty days reasonable for us to move here?”

  • Leigh Kimmel says:

    First human to be trained as a fighter pilot in the Imperial Space Navy. It was a big jump for a south Alabama boy who’d gotten into the brownshoe Navy only because ROTC paid for his engineering degree at Tuscaloosa. It was a good thing that Danny wasn’t the first member of a different species to fly the Kitties’ aerospace fighters, because the human body didn’t have a tail or retractable claws, among other anatomical differences.

    But the biggest jump he had to make was getting used to information interfaces that had been designed to the assumptions of obligate-carnivore ambush predators, not persistence predators descended from arboreal frugivores. Critical information jiggled to attract attention, rather than turning red. If he’d had more time, he would’ve figured out how to reconfigure the cockpit displays to work the way the human brain handled best — but the task force had gotten caught by surprise when they’d dropped back into realspace at what was supposed to be a system well away from the fighting. Which meant an ever-so-slight lag in his ability to process incoming information could make a critical difference in space combat against a swarm of Tchiador battlepods.

    So here he and his wing leader were on an alien world, a satellite of an exoplanet bearing an astonishing resemblance to Saturn, hoping the Lobsters wouldn’t be landing ground forces to hunt them down. At least this world was biocompatible for humans and Chongu, so he and Nyawral wouldn’t be starving amidst an abundance of inedible life, or dying of asphyxiation the moment their cockpit oxygen ran out.

    But those ruins made him wonder. Were they like the ones scattered here and there around the Chongu Empire, remnants of a long-lost interstellar civilization of mind-bending antiquity, whose demise may have had some relation to the Permian Extinction back on earth? Or might they be something more recent, remnants of a settlement now abandoned by a people who still had living representatives on this world? Representatives who might object to the presence of strangers from the sky on their world, trampling the land the Ancients once walked?

  • Dupin says:

    “If I sent ‘Houston, we have a problem,” do you think we’ll be alive to receive their response?”
    We were watching the movement on the screen where there shouldn’t be.
    “Well Kristof,” I drawled. “It’s about an hour there and an hour back to Titan, so…maybe. Either way, it’s some sort of first contact.”
    The creatures had crawled out of some rock formations…one looked like a somewhat crumbled sphere, another like pipes from a huge panpipe, and there were more, but—
    “What the hell are those critters anyway?”
    I shook my head. “Something new. I guess we get to name them. You streaming this back?”
    “Along with my message.”
    “We’ve been out there. We walked around over there. There weren’t any tracks or spoor or—”
    “And now they’re out and doing the same to our lander.”
    And one of them was up the steps and just outside our door.
    “This is the first clear day since we landed.”
    “Could be, but…what do we do?”
    “I’m not going out there…see what Houston says.”
    Then we heard it as we watched the one at our hatch. It reached out with one pseudopod for the door.
    “Tap…tap, tap, tap…tap. Tap. Tap.

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