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A quote: “There is one safeguard known generally to the wise, which is an advantage and security to all, but especially to democracies as against despots – suspicion.” ~~ Demosthenes
I’ll start with a story …
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Mr. Johnson, our 7th grade English teacher, lived alone in a modest home with an immaculate lawn and prize roses. Halloween featured tasteful decorations and full-sized candy bars. We’d sit at his feet on his pin-neat porch as he told goosebump worthy tales of the Comber place — the abandoned, decaying Victorian we knew was haunted. We shivered at the scandals that stalked its cobwebbed halls. Laughing because we were safe here in the jack-o-lantern’s glow.
By Thanksgiving the runaway boy from one town over escaped Mr. Johnson’s basement. A spotless place full of shiny sharp instruments and twelve graves.
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Now, it’s your turn.
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Can’t make the 100 word challenge, but…in the spirit of Halloween (Minus the scary stuff):
CASTLE IN MY ATTIC
I approached the familiar old castle
Cautiously, but excitedly.
I opened the door, and
Peered into the massive foyer.
Evidence of the castle’s former residents
Was still there,…As it had been a year ago.
There was the gossamer gown
Of a young and pretty princess.
The mask and costume of the jester
Brought a smile to my face.
The soldier’s uniform most certainly
Belonged to a descendent of the royal family.
Lurking in a corner, I saw the witch’s face
Peering from under the wrinkled brim of a black hat.
And, then my queen broke the magical spell
As she beckoned me with…”Dinner’s Ready!”
As I approached her sheepishly, she asked,
“Been rummaging in the Halloween Box?”
Well done!
I too failed the 100 word challenge but I’m sure all will be forgiven.
“I’m sorry but you are sure about that property?”
“Absolutely!” the man said. “I think it’s perfect for us!”
I pulled out my notes. “I have to warn you about a few things-”
“Ah-Ha!” he said. “An ethical man.”
“I knew he was the right choice,” the man’s wife replied.
“It is in quite the state of disrepair-”
“That’s part of the appeal!” he replied.
“The garden is in horrible condition.”
“But it’s so charming,” the wife said.
“And there is at least one monster in residence that we can’t-”
“Oh, you just sealed the deal young man!” he said with a grin as he threw a bag of gold at me. “A little extra for your trouble.”
“I can’t accept this.”
He grinned. “Holding out for more? Very wise!” Another bag of gold was added as I brought out the forms.
“Congratulations, Mister and Missus Addams. The house is yours.”
That was an unexpected a devilishly sharp twist at the end!
For as long as I could remember, the big old house had always stood empty. Every day the school bus would go right past it, and I’d wonder who lived there, what they’d done. But whenever I’d ask my parents, they’d quick change the subject, and when efforts to redirect my attention failed, they’d switch to punishments.
So I learned to keep my curiosity to myself. As I’d see the old house on my daily bus ride, I started making up stories about it. Some of them were mundane, about misfortunes and dysfunctions of the sort I’d read in the sort of books adults approved of, and others were more fanciful. Lost princesses and kings in exile, dimensional doorways into realms of monstrous eldritch horror, all the sorts of stories that my teachers derided as “escapist trash” and refused to let me write book reports about.
And then I graduated from high school and headed off to college. For the first time a whole world of research materials was opened to me, including microfilms of old newspapers and public records. It enabled me to find the answers to the questions my parents refused to answer, and finally punished me for asking. The truth proved more mundane than my imaginings of lost kingdoms and eldritch portals, but more interesting than mere financial mismanagement or ugly divorces.
The oldest part of the house had been a station on the Underground Railroad — until it had been betrayed by a person who should’ve been the most trustworthy. They’d been lucky and gotten warned in time to send the escapees on their way to the next station before the raid came. But it had been an ugly one, and one of the stationmasters had been shot in the process. Years later, people claimed her shade still haunted the place.
Amidst the prosperity of the Gilded Age, a new owner had expanded it, completely surrounding the little clapboard pioneer house with new construction in the style that was coming out of the UK and is still called Victorian. It had been something of a showplace amidst the more modest small-town environment, and while the parties might’ve been staid events by our standards, they still made the local papers.
By the Roaring Twenties, it was widely suspected to be a bootlegger’s hideout, its basements a storehouse for illegal liquor brought across the Canadian border by fast cars and even faster boats across Lake Erie. Yet no lawman had been able to find anything, and the rumors ran faster than any rumrunner.
It looks like WWII was when fortunes turned downward. The family who’d owned it lost their only son. Their money had been able to keep him from being sent overseas, but the supposedly cushy billet as a supply sergeant proved to have its own hazards. A stupid accident on a Saturday night, and he was one more name on the local newspaper’s daily list of the fallen.
As the bereaved elders lingered, they either lost interest in maintaining their house, or post-War inflation eroded their means to do so. It no longer was a showplace, the house on the hill that aroused envy in some and ambition in others. Somewhere around the 1970’s I could no longer find any telephone number for that address, and while the property taxes continued to be paid to the county every year, there’s evidence that the lot was entangled in an ugly inheritance battle with multiple collateral claimants to the estate, none of whom were willing to compromise.
It’s sad to think of what has been wasted because each of them wanted it all. If they’d just sold the property and divided up the proceeds, it might well still be someone’s home — although given how hard it can be to heat and cool such old structures, the various energy crises of the 70’s and beyond might’ve led to its abandonment, or at least a very expensive retrofitting with insulation and modern windows and doors. Instead, it’s deteriorated to the point that it’ll probably have to be torn down when either the surviving claimants decide to cut their losses or they all pass on and the state takes it.
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