Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

Friday Fiction: 200 Word Challenge

A quote: “Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times.” ~~ Ann Landers

I’ll start with a story …

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Zeus was 95 lbs of fearsome looking German Shepherd, but he was as violent as Ferdinand the Bull and he was in love. With cats.

But the barn cats ignored him.

His muzzle had gone gray by the time he came home carrying a cat by the head.

Zeus laid the cat at my feet with a longing in his eyes that wouldn’t be denied. “Oh honey” I breathed as I kneeled to find a battered but live cat. A calico sack of bones with bald patches and a chewed ear.

Off to the vet we went and little Tyche (a cliché but I couldn’t think of a better name) was swept into care for several days of medication, iv’s and calories.

Zeus laid right next to her carrier the whole ride home, watching her. I put her convalescent crate right next to his favorite bed, in the family room where the afternoon sun shined warm on them. He flopped right down and resumed his vigil.

Summer turned to fall, fall to winter and Tyche left the crate to bed with Zeus. He was her shadow around the house, let her eat first, and lay patiently when she climbed on his back to knead his fur before curling up with a purr that sounded like a cross between a rusty gate and a mis-firing minibike.

Winter turned into spring and Zeus led her out into the garden to his most favorite spot at the foot of an old crepe myrtle. The dappled shadow was cooling, the wind brought scents of blooming flowers and the two laid side-by-side to enjoy birds and butterflies.

Spring into summer and that was part of their daily routine, curled up until I called them in for supper.

One day, as fall was making its return, Zeus didn’t come when I called.

I found him there, stretched out and at peace with Tyche curled on his side, protecting him.

For three days I couldn’t get her to eat, even as I laid down next to his bed and tried handfeeding her bits of favorite foods. Then she paced the house, going from room to room looking for him, before returning to his bed.

Maybe it was her broken heart, or maybe he called to her from the other side of the Rainbow Bridge, but her rusty purrs had stopped as she laid in the sun in that big bed.

I cut a square from the bed, wrapped her snug and buried her deep next to Zeus underneath the crepe myrtle. And in the soil above their grave I sowed perennial seeds of daisy, coneflower, and black eyed Susan. I think they’ll enjoy it when the shade is dappled and the wind is sweet and the butterflies abound.

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Now, it’s your turn.
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Note: I confess I went way over 200 words … but sometimes the story is in control. 🙂

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5 Comments
  • Scott says:

    Damn it got dusty in here by the time that story was done..

  • Sheila Garrett says:

    They were born on the same day. Storm, of course, was on his feet and moving within two hours but Tibbet took two weeks before he crawled out of the nest behind the hay bales and it was another month before he made it down out of the loft, but after that the pair were inseparable.

    It was funny at first to see the leggy colt sproinging around the tiny kitten or Tibbet sprinting all of fifteen feet while Storm raced across the pasture. But we all stared in amazement the first time we saw that three month old kitten on top of Storm, claws dug into his bristly mane, as the colt walked carefully out of the barn, trying not to unseat his friend. And of course it wasn’t long before they were both racing across the pasture, Tibbet going faster and farther than any barn cat had ever been.

    Life goes on though and routine training milestones come and go. Our horses are Andalusians, destined for either cattle work or dressage, and both require excellent balance and agility. So we send all our yearlings to huge mountain pastures where they run free for two years developing those skills and learning to be horses.

    That’s when we found Tibbet was gone. We searched the barn of course, until one of the hands who had taken the yearlings out thought he might have seen the cat on Storm as they ran off into the pasture. We went back to the pasture to try and find him to bring him home but then we couldn’t find either one of them.

    We did finally find them eventually. Two months before we were due to bring the three year olds back to the farm one of the hands spotted Storm with binoculars across the valley on another mountain.

    I wish those two could talk. Tibbet was as skinny as a rake and missing an eye with a scarred cheek while Storm had a full set of scars down his ribs and haunch. The only thing we can figure out was a cougar must have tried to ambush Storm and gotten quite a surprise when Tibbet was right there in his face. We won’t ever try to separate those two again.

  • Cameron says:

    (Slightly more than 200 but to heck with it.)

    Lord Tabby was a regal beast that ruled our home with a velvet paw. His predatory nature kept our yard clear of anything smaller than a raccoon although he did find opossums acceptable.

    When my little sister successfully petitioned my mother to bring home a dog, it was with the understanding that Lord Tabby would have a say. She brought home a sad and broken looking dog named Dylan. The shelter said he’d been treated horribly by his people. I could see it for myself in how he flinched when we offered him a treat.

    Then the cat arrived to see what this intruder was doing in his home. He marched up fearlessly to the pup who quivered at the cat’s approach while standing his ground. The two went nose to nose and we all held our breath.

    Lord Tabby gave a dismissive sniff and then rubbed his chin on the dog to indicate acceptance. What followed over several weeks was the cat tutoring Dylan on How Things Were Done in this house. He seemed to be an eager student and was very respectful to the cat. And in return, Dylan was permitted to have bursts of puppy energy that saw toys getting flung through the house.

  • Leigh Kimmel says:

    I grew up in Appleton, where my father was involved with projects he couldn’t talk about. Now and again, he’d bring home an animal, usually a dog, that we were to train and keep around the house. But never for long, because he’d always have to take the creature back to the lab for one reason or another.

    After a few times, I stopped letting myself get attached to them. I’d go through the checklists, do all the activities we were supposed to, but nothing else. No more trying to sneak a dog into my bedroom for the night, or playing fetch in the back yard Just Because. It was only a matter of time before the latest dog would have to go back to the lab and I’d never see it again, and I was tired of having my heart ripped up again and again.

    Dad must’ve picked up on it, because I overheard him remarking to Mom that maybe it was time to rethink doing the home testing, now that I didn’t seem to be into it as much any more. Mom was the one who pointed out that you can only break a kid’s heart so many times before the kid stops even trying to attach. But then she was the former Army brat, whose dad would get a new assignment just about the time she’d finally made an actual friend in her last school. She’d told me that even after she married Dad and settled down, it was often easier to just let neighbors stay acquaintances than risk letting it develop into actual friendship, lest it be whisked away as well. And that was years after they’d settled down and even bought a house.

    And then this little gray tabby kitten showed up on our doorstep. Not one of the animals from the lab, but a stray that must’ve been pushed out of the nest by its mama because it was getting too old to nurse any more and another litter was coming along. But I was still young enough that I didn’t know that side of alley cat life, and I just saw this adorable little furball and realized he could be mine — and he wouldn’t have to go back to the lab like all the other animals.

    Apparently Dad must’ve talked to some of his supervisors and gotten switched to a different program, because a few weeks later he came home with a half-grown German Shepherd pup. Toby was going to be staying with us long-term, growing up with me, and with Greyling, as I’d named the kitten.

    For the next eight years, we romped together — and Toby was actually very good about playing gently with Greyling, as if he understood that a cat was smaller and weaker, but also formidably armed. Sure, there were some special tests we had to do with Toby, certain things we had to train him to do, and sometimes Dad had to take him to the lab for evaluations. But every evening he came back home with Dad, just as he’d promised and Toby would go straight to Greyling, who’d purr in delight to have his “big brother” back.

    And then I graduated from high school, and it was off to Madison to start work on a science degree at U of Wisconsin. I could almost feel Toby’s and Greyling’s eyes on me as I climbed into the old DeSoto and we headed off with my worldly possessions in the trunk.

    I’d play with them every time I came home on break, but somehow it wasn’t quite the same any more. I think it was in my sophomore year that Greyling just sort of disappeared, and the next year Dad had to take Toby in to the lab for the last time.

    In the decades since, we’ve learned a lot about the secret experiments that were going on at the lab where my dad worked. Some of them would never have been allowed if it hadn’t been for Cold War secrecy, and if Tsar Joseph hadn’t opened up the old Soviet genetic engineering laboratory records in the wake of the Miracle of the Lightning Bolt, ours might still be secret. But President Reagan had felt obligated to make a clean breast of America’s work in that field, even if his revelations may well have been the root of our current troubles.

  • David Parziale says:

    I had a American Spitz cat killer. Found tortoise shel kitty out front on cold rainy Nov. eve. Told wife keep in bedroom till morning. Take to shelter. Overnight wife went to bathroom and forgot to close door. In morning got up and freaked, where’s cat and in bathroom was cuddled up with cat killer. Sebastian and Abbygail became lifelong buddies. Now I have 3 chihuahuas

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